Critique

Having my work critiqued is so vital to my becoming a better writer and for my paper to progress. I think the more readings and productive criticism my paper gets the better. I was very grateful to have a couple of different set of eyes to take a look at my draft and tell me their thoughts. At this point in my paper I am kind of stuck with making connections. So, I am revising what I have, adding more and now, trying to figure out to make connections between the information. I know everything is related – I suppose if I nail down my thesis that may help some. I still have not been able to do that and that has led to some kind of indecisive research and writing, not what I’m shooting for.